Hilarious edit, but it would have been more effective if you had chosen a more appropriate target like taco bell. Although I guess it could just be personal preference, maybe some people really like taco bell. Personally I like KFC.
Remove the word blood. Also, the way you've faded the slides together is a big distraction and makes it hard to see what's going on in many parts. Use a normal cut.
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