Because this'll prolly get a considerable amount of exposure (in addition to that it's already gotten on digg), I'd advise you to do the following things:
1. Capitalize "finnish".
2. Find a picture of Timbaland. The one you have features Magoo prominently, and will confuse people.
3. Make it clear that the story isn't over after Timbaland releases the ringtone.
4. Sync it better.
5. Just polish it all-around.
it's backwards because you're looking out from kirby's monitor at him. but one could actually change it to be the right way and you could say it's the reflection. it's fine this way though.
and i just commented 4 on one page.
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