A really touching story but this is so f*cking old the moon just collapsed. What's worse is you accompanied it with the most f*cking overused music for a sad Ytmnd EVER.
This could've been legendary. Try removing the whole presence of 'where is your god now' and just make it plain random, maybe removing the text, making it tiled, and putting in f*cked up music. And change the title to 'The Best Thing Scince'
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