great job, the interesting thing about this segment, is that it's going from somebody's recollection of events, not reality, hence why it is presented in this way, because that's how it was remembered.
GREAT JOB! although being a huge fan of doctor who, i think you need some Doctor who people in there, which i will now convieniently link.
http://www.dwwa.net/dr3/Claws/Iamaster.wav
http://www.dwwa.net/dr8/TVMovie/iamdr.wav
http://www.dwwa.net/dr4/Genesis/Daleks.wav
http://content.ytmnd.com/content/e/b/3/eb321a94aa061487b0eee4abd12501ac.wav
fantastic ytmnd! you need to expand it and it could easily get in top 5
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