God all you did was take a very very very old passage that's been on the internet for ages and add some pictures. This doesn't deserve this high of a rating.
This just wins for originality and effort. The policeman actually taking notes, the entire place being stripped...and all this added onto the genius of the way it fits.
Gah, I missed the original? Sounds like you cut out tons of cool stuff and made it suck more. So a 3 because you cut stuff, but +1 for the slowed down "NOOOOOO". That sealed the deal, there.
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