GRADED: Watch out Max!
Created on: August 26th, 2006
GRADED:  Watch out Max!

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August 26th, 2006
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btw I know this sucks, I'm not good at this sort of stuff. Plus if "Eagle" is actually a moderator I'm going to look like a total idiot.
August 26th, 2006
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Also, the lyrics cut out after about 25 seconds because I think Cartman would start to get annoying after about 30 :P
August 26th, 2006
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Nice one
August 26th, 2006
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+2 for font choice, +2 for using a check minus, -2 for not using the real graded music. change it and ill be glad to five you good sir.
August 26th, 2006
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Awesome.
August 26th, 2006
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any marin-rape gifs out there?
August 26th, 2006
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You win.
August 26th, 2006
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5'd for remix and Hitler moustache. VERY classy.
August 26th, 2006
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By the way, equating "Josh" with "F*g" was pure genius. Way to buast the chops of an uber-raged nerd.
August 26th, 2006
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Eagle means Eaglebird. Those four letters were just too much for JoshCube.
August 26th, 2006
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Yup, Eagle's a mod, and I'm I think "15-year-old" works just as well as "15 year old"
August 26th, 2006
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Cutting the lyrics out after a while was good to. Most people would overdo it.
August 26th, 2006
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I like it a lot, I just request you use the original graded music.
August 26th, 2006
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k ill take out the Eagle thing then, thanks
August 26th, 2006
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lol
August 26th, 2006
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thought his name was eaglbird
August 26th, 2006
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Grammar ftw. Great job.
August 26th, 2006
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After reading all that what the hell is up with all the capitilized words with hyphens?
August 26th, 2006
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August 26th, 2006
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I love the GRADED fad, but -1 for not using the f*g's music. BUT +6 FOR MAKING YOUR OWN THEME!
August 26th, 2006
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the hitler moustache was funny 5'd
August 26th, 2006
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15-Year-Old is correct. So are a few of those other "corrections" you made.
August 26th, 2006
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5 for Hitler mustache
August 26th, 2006
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Okay.
August 26th, 2006
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try to vary word usage throughout your document
August 26th, 2006
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You sure showed him.
August 26th, 2006
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You sure showed him.
August 26th, 2006
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"15-year-old" is correct -- though in prose it should actually be written "fifteen-year-old". Also, both the "and that" that you corrected and your resulting correction to "which" are incorrect; you should simply have added a comma before "and".
August 26th, 2006
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15-year-old is correct with hyphens. "Noone" needs a space. 5 stars if you fix these.
August 26th, 2006
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-1 for missing the apostrophe in "can't" (last paragraph)
August 26th, 2006
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already* and can't* - two missed mistakes I noticed right away. You're welcome.
August 26th, 2006
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I like it
August 26th, 2006
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Actually no, you are only required to spell out numbers if the number is ten or bellow, or maybe it includes ten, I forget. Everything else above ten can be written as a number.
August 26th, 2006
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No; every number below 100 should be written out in prose, Intellectawe.
August 26th, 2006
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Oh, and I forgot, your change of "(mostly)" is incorrect, too. You should have moved "mostly" after "have". So the moral of this story is that you shouldn't post grammar corrections unless your own grammar is impeccable.
August 26th, 2006
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=) eagle isn't a mod anymore either
August 26th, 2006
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that arrow from mostly to the space after "have" was implying to move it
August 26th, 2006
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sw00t toot
August 26th, 2006
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ROFL :D
August 26th, 2006
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lol v funny
August 26th, 2006
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Who's the douchebag that wrote Max this message? Good editing job!
August 26th, 2006
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A lot of those weren't actually errors. You're supposed to have hyphens in "15-year-olds" or any-year-olds.
August 26th, 2006
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-> "quote used in signature negates impact of the above word"
August 26th, 2006
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Sucker!!!!
August 26th, 2006
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You missed the apostrophe on can't.
August 26th, 2006
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Eh, who is JoshCube? I've never heard of this guy.
August 26th, 2006
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you missed a few mistakes that i caught.
August 26th, 2006
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You sure showed him.
August 26th, 2006
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Can you do better? http://smoothmove.ytmnd.com/ if you want to have a go.
August 26th, 2006
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You could add an ' to [cant]
August 26th, 2006
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Haha, yes, here's the graded version. Thx.
August 26th, 2006
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This was pretty funny as well, good job.
August 26th, 2006
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there are Many-More mistakes on this that you Didn't-Correct
August 26th, 2006
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U GET A -100 BITCH
August 26th, 2006
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enough, of this f*g josh-cube f*ggot allready!
August 26th, 2006
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Beautiful.
August 27th, 2006
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haha...that's all you get is my 'haha' and 5...i'm drunk
August 27th, 2006
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whoa this is really funny
August 27th, 2006
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I'd bet he thinks he's responsible for YTMND's current lack of funds. He would think that.
June 28th, 2007
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lol