I have Been Trying (synced)
Created on: August 3rd, 2006
I have Been Trying (synced)
Good song.

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August 3rd, 2006
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Really catchy...
August 3rd, 2006
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yea #2
August 3rd, 2006
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I like, but it unsynced still funny
August 3rd, 2006
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cool song, but the bad sync destroys it...
August 3rd, 2006
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nice work....on one of the frames...."right" should be used instead of "write"....
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I can solve his haiku problem, here's one. one two three four five one two three four five six seven one two three four five
August 3rd, 2006
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This music is a winner.
August 3rd, 2006
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Good, but the frames run ahead in Firefox, if this is IE centric then nevermind.
August 3rd, 2006
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catchy as fuk
August 3rd, 2006
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that was cool i like the music, but it's unsynched, -1
August 3rd, 2006
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yaay
August 3rd, 2006
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It was synced when I made it in flash. :(
August 3rd, 2006
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win!
August 3rd, 2006
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Tally Hall is the sh*t.
August 3rd, 2006
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grammar ftl
August 3rd, 2006
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5'd for awesome and for tally hall
August 3rd, 2006
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you have been trying
August 3rd, 2006
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Yay for Tally Hall
August 3rd, 2006
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all write? WRONG!
August 3rd, 2006
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I have no idea how to sync it. If someone wanted to edit the .fla file to make it synced then ask me and you will get credited.
August 3rd, 2006
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awesome (IBsyncissue)
August 3rd, 2006
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Good song
August 3rd, 2006
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very cool
August 3rd, 2006
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all RIGHT not all WRITE. please fix or i will go insane.
August 3rd, 2006
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i love it, but your sync blows. fix it!
August 3rd, 2006
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tally hall is teh sh*t. the vids are even better. ENCHIRITO!
August 3rd, 2006
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I really want to give you a five but.. please fix the sync!!
August 3rd, 2006
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Cute song. But you're a bit retarded when it comes to: A) Spelling. It's right, not write. B) Synchronization. It's way off.
August 3rd, 2006
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I seem to remember getting flamed for posting a YTMND with lyrics.
August 3rd, 2006
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i thought he meant... "just write all night"
August 3rd, 2006
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lol it fails and that's why it wins
August 3rd, 2006
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It is losing its sync by a bit towards the end on firefox. Also "right".
August 3rd, 2006
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I'm giving you a 4 instead of 3 cuz i gave the dorito guy a 3 and this is way better than that even though it isnt synced.
August 3rd, 2006
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Can't....stop...listening.
August 3rd, 2006
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"I've been trying to get this Haiku just RIGHT" not write. It's also synced terribly.
August 3rd, 2006
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mispelling right : -4. Try AGAIN.
August 3rd, 2006
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sync is suck, but I like the song
August 3rd, 2006
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This unsyncs and just keeps getting worse. Also typo.
August 3rd, 2006
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Bad sync rapes it to the ground.
August 3rd, 2006
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i could turn that into a haiku. but who couldent.
August 3rd, 2006
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Cool song
August 3rd, 2006
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5'd for tally hall.
August 3rd, 2006
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5 for Tally Hall
August 3rd, 2006
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lol what a cheap fix, o well 5'd
August 3rd, 2006
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Tally Hall rocks
August 3rd, 2006
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Awesome.
August 3rd, 2006
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cute
August 3rd, 2006
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what is 62191
August 3rd, 2006
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The # of syllable
August 3rd, 2006
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What a dumb song.
August 3rd, 2006
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Yes it is a good song...
August 3rd, 2006
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i wanted him to get it right at the end..
August 3rd, 2006
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I woulda taken out the 'some' and the 'or' (for the first two)
August 3rd, 2006
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upped from 2 to 4 for sync, but it'd be better if you put it back the way it was with displaying each word as it was spoken. it makes the whole # of syllables thing funnier.
August 3rd, 2006
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it's a song! that's what ytmnd is for! (the song sucks)
August 3rd, 2006
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5'd for Tally Hall
August 3rd, 2006
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win
August 3rd, 2006
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What the...
August 3rd, 2006
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Oh yeah, for those of you who do not "get it" allow me to educate your simple one star minds. A haiku has five syllables for the first line, seven for the next, and five for the last. A syllable is how many "sounds" are in the word you say. For instance, "instance" has two and "Syllable" has three.
August 3rd, 2006
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auto-fail
August 3rd, 2006
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While traditional English Haiku interpretations may have used a 5-7-5 syllable structure, modern haiku typically just try to be readable in a single breath http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku
August 3rd, 2006
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Catchy. I want it now!
August 3rd, 2006
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This sucks
August 3rd, 2006
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i liked the first version better
August 3rd, 2006
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A really cool, clever song. It's a shame all you did was type up the lyrics to it and call that original.
August 4th, 2006
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but it's not 5-7-5 syllables.. it's 5-7-5 MORES! How the f*ck could the whole f*cking western world get this wrong?
August 4th, 2006
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August 4th, 2006
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As a U of M student, I feel obligated to five this. Support your local bands, bitch!
August 4th, 2006
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He says "I'm through" not "I'm out of space"
August 4th, 2006
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5'd for making me sane.
August 4th, 2006
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Do you see banana man?
August 4th, 2006
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5
August 4th, 2006
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TALLY f*ckING HALL FOR THE WIN BABY!
August 4th, 2006
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Wow. What a steaming load. 1.
August 4th, 2006
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very catchy
August 4th, 2006
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The poem was lost in me. Send Help.
August 4th, 2006
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August 4th, 2006
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oh god, this is gonna be stuck in my head all day.
August 4th, 2006
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5 for Tally Hall! i'm seeing them on the 8th.
August 4th, 2006
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Why is this funny?
August 4th, 2006
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i dont get it
August 4th, 2006
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5 for Tally Hall :D
August 4th, 2006
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Go watch Directions and Banana Man videos on their website 8)
August 4th, 2006
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?
August 4th, 2006
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TALLY HALL BRAVO! Here's my own Tally Hall based site, based on Ruler of Everything. http://stanruler.ytmnd.com/
August 4th, 2006
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HEY THE FUNNYNESS SEEMS TO BE LOST, PLEASE FIND IT FOR 5
August 4th, 2006
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I don't get it, why did you write "out of space" when he cleary sings "through"?
August 4th, 2006
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nice song lyrics, dude!
August 4th, 2006
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I really don't see the appeal of this.
August 4th, 2006
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cant even get the lyrics right
August 4th, 2006
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5 for the makers of Banana Man.
August 4th, 2006
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sh*t
August 4th, 2006
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"and rhymes are not my forte" lmao
August 4th, 2006
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Quite catchy.
August 4th, 2006
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Its not f*cking hard you stupid gay emo f*ckers I own at haikus.
August 4th, 2006
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Fun song
August 4th, 2006
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5 7 5
August 4th, 2006
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I have been trying To write a funny comment But humor's lost on me 5-7-6... DAMMIT!
August 4th, 2006
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He never sings "out of space"... why did you put that in the text?
August 4th, 2006
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Synched now, but still not funny.
August 4th, 2006
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That's terrible. The song sucks, you didn't get the words right, and who cares?
August 4th, 2006
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lol
August 4th, 2006
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5 to counter the likely downvoters you will get by way of people simply not understanding what a haiku is
August 4th, 2006
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love it.
August 4th, 2006
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It is sync'd for me
August 4th, 2006
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And xycos: There is nothing (as I understand it) in the English language closer to a morae than a syllable. I would think that if you were really upset about this you would lament the fact that Americans think ANYTHING 5-7-5 counts as a haiku, regardless of content. (See 7th comment, which still fails by American standards because "seven" has two syllables.)_
August 4th, 2006
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Tally Hall rocks!
August 4th, 2006
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haiku for YOU: YTMND, the morning I wake to see, a haiku greets mee
August 4th, 2006
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I think the song about telling somebody that you love them has been done before.
August 4th, 2006
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Nice try
August 4th, 2006
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Very original. That is enough for a five.
August 4th, 2006
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Lame. Half of those would work if he changed them slightly.
August 4th, 2006
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Wishing this were gone/Far from the top fifteen list/Songs are not funny.
August 4th, 2006
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5 for Tally hall!
August 4th, 2006
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Nice, Tally Hall
August 4th, 2006
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4 for originality, eh, what the hell, i'll give it a 5, but this is just between you and me, ya hear?
August 4th, 2006
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Catchy. I shall nod my head as I present you with a five. Enjoy.
August 4th, 2006
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catchy and kinda relaxing
August 4th, 2006
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I LOVE TALLY HALL. 5'd for one of the best songs off Marvin's Marvellous Mechanical Museum.
August 4th, 2006
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Isn't a haiku supposed to reference the weather?
August 4th, 2006
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cool beans
August 4th, 2006
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5 7 5 f*ggot!
August 4th, 2006
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need the song!
August 4th, 2006
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As a fellow suburban Detroiter, I must 5 this for Tally Hall. Plus, the song is as catchy as all f*ck.
August 4th, 2006
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Excellent song, and I want it in full!
August 4th, 2006
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p00pd00d, haikus are traditionally supposed to describe nature (iirc) but you know how most people think you can do anything with it... there is another name for the ones that don't involve weather, but I can't remember the name atm.
August 4th, 2006
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every star is for the song only
August 4th, 2006
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whats this song's name?
August 4th, 2006
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That guy sucks at haikus. xP
August 4th, 2006
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Extremely catchy. =D Also... syncs perfectly for my in Firefox. Not sure what all those other idiots are crying about the sync for. Seems just right to me.
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The sync didn't work/for me, so I won't rate this/a "0" beats "1"
August 4th, 2006
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Someone should tell the guy who wrote the song that hiakus don't have to rhyme.
August 4th, 2006
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Haiku writing motherf*cker
August 4th, 2006
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5 for failure!
August 4th, 2006
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Are those the same guys who did that Bananaman song? 4'ed for being f*cking catchy
August 4th, 2006
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5 for a catchy song. your lyrics don't really match, tho.
August 4th, 2006
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I like the song. The image, not so much.
August 4th, 2006
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Agreed. Catchy as hell. 5/5.
August 4th, 2006
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Although, it seems perfectly sync'd, as I've left this running and it seems sync'd on the 20th-or-so playthrough.
August 4th, 2006
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Sauce gets refilled?
August 4th, 2006
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really, like 18 people have said it. where did you get "out of space?" wrong lyrics -2. otherwise really good
August 4th, 2006
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and one more thing, he doesn't pronounce "forte" as fôrt-ay he says is like "fort" so you're a syllable off in that line. sorry to nitpick.
August 4th, 2006
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Tally Hall's one of my favorite bands ever.
August 4th, 2006
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ZOMG. I love tally hall. Anyone that hasn't checked them out should. myspace.com/tallyhallcom
August 4th, 2006
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Can I get a T? T!!!! And if you hit me with the A L LY then you'd see why the Hall is here for you all. The mini mall is callin us all in.
August 4th, 2006
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"I Have Been Trying (SYNCHED)" Synched? Bullsh*t.
August 4th, 2006
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I like it.
August 4th, 2006
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catchy song
August 4th, 2006
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5'd for Tally Hall. Needs more banana man though.
August 4th, 2006
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It syncs in IE, they're all probably just Firefox-loving dogs.
August 4th, 2006
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Changed my vote to a 1 to counteract all the NARVs. This is YTMND blasphemy, it's just a song that you typed the lyrics to. Yes, the song is catchy - but how does that make it a 5!??!?!?11/?1/?!?! No punchline, no wtf factor - nothing that makes a YTMND.
August 4th, 2006
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A quite funny song! I would be glad to five this. You're the man now, dog!
August 4th, 2006
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Someone needs to go back to english... "All night for you alright I'm through." is 8 syllables not 9...
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Haiku's are dam ard to do. So True.
August 4th, 2006
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Not synced. At all.
August 4th, 2006
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That song is really cool haha
August 4th, 2006
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OMG auto win for Tally Hall.
August 4th, 2006
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nice, something I haven't seen before.
August 4th, 2006
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I really like the song.
August 4th, 2006
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WELL?! DOE SHE GET IT RIGHT?!
August 4th, 2006
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Nice job. Tally rocks woooo +5
August 4th, 2006
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Tally Hall is awesome live in concert too. I have both their demo cd and first official cd signed by all of them :D
August 4th, 2006
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song sounds very hawaiian influenced.
August 4th, 2006
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I double quadruple nominate this song for the YTMND Soundtrack.
August 4th, 2006
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5 for tally hall. been forever since i've heard of them.
August 4th, 2006
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I enjoy the sites/that educate the masses./For this, you are fived.
August 4th, 2006
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Love the song.
August 4th, 2006
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August 4th, 2006
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"I can solve his haiku problem, here's one. one two three four five one two three four five six seven one two three four five" Sorry, fail!!! 1234567 is 8 syllables! FAIL!
August 4th, 2006
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You kinda ruined how subtle and clever the original song lyrics were with this. Part of the greatness of it was hearing the song then realizing that it's all made up of broken haikus. But, it's nice to see another Tally Hall.
August 4th, 2006
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oh god, i spilled my sauce all over you, sorry
August 4th, 2006
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Funny.
August 4th, 2006
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i like it :p
August 4th, 2006
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yey!!
August 4th, 2006
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Tally Hall for the f*cking win! My favorite thing about that song is that he actually pronounces "forte" correctly.
August 4th, 2006
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I love tally hall! I knew it was only a matter of time before they made it here
August 4th, 2006
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I love Tally Hall. Saw them live, spoke with them, and loved their stuff before they started getting big. Great stuff.
August 4th, 2006
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haikus are so rad / this site isn't quite so rad / but haikus are cool
August 4th, 2006
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Cool
August 4th, 2006
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i like but for some reason i think when he says "im through" its not supposed to be part of the line... then again its the first time ive ever heard this, and im sure you looked up the lyrics after the misspell
August 4th, 2006
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5'd
August 4th, 2006
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nice song
August 4th, 2006
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+5 for being good, -1 because I hate local bands (due to my experience as a Flint local)
August 4th, 2006
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"alright-i'm through" is not party of the last haiku. =P
August 4th, 2006
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cute
August 4th, 2006
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Bad song. I don't care about his haikus.
August 4th, 2006
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cool song f*ck all the dicksucking downvoters
August 4th, 2006
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5'd for actually being clever, but not retarded non-sequitur bullsh*t that typically makes the top 15
August 4th, 2006
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I enjoyed it. Must download the song now.
August 4th, 2006
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Simply awesome
August 4th, 2006
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5'd for the guy pronouncing "forte" correctly.
August 4th, 2006
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Tally Hall ftw :x
August 4th, 2006
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Great find.
August 4th, 2006
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-1 for forte being pronoucned "fort." Pissed me off, and I blame you.
August 4th, 2006
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And yes, I know the hypocrisy in me misspelling pronounced just now. f*ck you.
August 4th, 2006
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5'd for tally hall. go blue.
August 4th, 2006
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What a great song... *yoink*
August 5th, 2006
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what a great song!
August 7th, 2006
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boring
August 7th, 2006
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I'll 5 it, but I liked it better when the lyrics appeared gradually
August 11th, 2006
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the balogna is in the nest, the pastrami is recyclable.
August 12th, 2006
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i'll add a comment by saying you should fix the line with "forte" and leave it as "fort-" as they leave out the last syllable of "forte" which is pronounced "for-tay"
July 31st, 2008
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FAIL
August 14th, 2006
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sh*t... pure sh*t
October 1st, 2006
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Actually, "forte" as in a proficiency is supposed to be pronounced "fort." "For-tay" is the pronunciation of an accented "forte`" that has to do with music.
October 18th, 2006
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Great
October 22nd, 2006
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Totally awesome.
January 25th, 2007
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5'd